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1 Male + 1 Female (M + F) 5 - 8 Minutes Emotional Drama

Five Minutes to Confess

Full Shooting Script in Industry Courier Monospace Format

FADE IN:
INT. SMALL CLINIC WAITING ROOM - NIGHT
Ek single TUBE LIGHT buzz kar rahi hai. Reception desk lamp ka soft glow. Frosted window par baarish ki halki tapping.
Plastic chairs. Wall clock. Appointment slip. Ek guitar case.
KABIR (34), faded kurta, stubble, thaka hua musician, ek chair par jhukkar baitha hai. Uske side mein guitar case tikka hua.
NAINA (30), simple cotton salwar suit, baal tied back, ek paper envelope clutch kiye saamne wali chair par baithi hai.
Dono chup.
Kabir appointment slip ko dekhta hai.
KABIR
Doctor bhi late hai.
Hum dono ki tarah.
Naina bina dekhe.
NAINA
Kuch aadatein purani ho jaati hain.
Kuch log nahi.
Silence.
Kabir uski taraf dekhta hai.
KABIR
Naina...
NAINA
Nahi. Pehle tum bol do.
Is baar tumhara turn hai.
Kabir halka sa smile karta hai, phir toot jaata hai.
KABIR
Main bas wait kar raha tha.
NAINA
Haan. Yeh tumhara best skill raha hai.
Wait karna.
Kabir aankhen neeche kar leta hai.
KABIR
Tum ab bhi gussa ho?
NAINA
Gussa?
(beat)
Kabir, gussa toh time pe khatam ho gaya tha.
Ab bas thakaan hai.
Kabir swallow karta hai.
KABIR
Maine kabhi jaan-boojh ke...
NAINA
Chhoda nahi?
(beat)
Haan. Tumhara favourite line.
Naina envelope ko aur tightly pakadti hai.
KABIR
Main samjha nahi tha.
NAINA
Tumne samajhna chaha hi nahi.
Beat.
Kabir guitar case ko ek second dekhta hai.
KABIR
Tum yahan kyun aayi ho?
Naina finally uski taraf dekhti hai.
NAINA
Goodbye bolne.
Kabir freeze.
KABIR
Kya?
Naina envelope table par rakh deti hai.
NAINA
Transfer ho gaya hai.
School bhi. Ghar bhi.
Main next week city chhod rahi hoon.
KABIR
Naina...
NAINA
Doctor ka appointment tha.
Par main pehle aa gayi.
Socha... agar tum mil gaye,
toh ek baar sach bol doon.
Kabir envelope ko dekhta hai.
KABIR
Yeh kya hai?
NAINA
Kholo.
Kabir envelope kholta hai. Andar ek purana APPOINTMENT SLIP aur ek chhoti note.
INSERT - NOTE
"Aaj shaam 6 baje. Agar aao, toh sach bolna."
BACK TO SCENE
Kabir ka chehra safed pad jaata hai.
KABIR
Tumne mujhe bulaya tha?
NAINA
Haan.
Five minutes ke liye.
Bas itna hi time tha mere paas.
Kabir note ko dekhta rehta hai.
KABIR
Main aaya kyun nahi...
NAINA
Kyunki tum late the?
KABIR
Kyunki main dar gaya tha.
Naina ka expression change hota hai.
NAINA
Kis baat se?
Kabir saans leta hai. Guitar case par haath rakhta hai.
KABIR
Is baat se ki main tumse pyaar karta tha.
Aur main us layak nahi tha.
Naina hil jaati hai.
KABIR (CONT'D)
Main broke tha.
Paisa bhi nahi tha, himmat bhi nahi thi.
Main sochta tha tum mere saath...
aur neeche gir jaogi.
Toh maine tumhe...
(beat)
khud se bacha liya.
Naina ki aankhon mein gussa, dard, disbelief.
NAINA
Tumne mujhe bachaya?
(laughs bitterly)
Tumne mujhe poocha tak nahi.
Kabir ko chot lagti hai.
KABIR
Main jaanta hoon.
Main galat tha.
NAINA
Galat?
Kabir, tumne breakup ko noble bana diya.
Jaise main koi burden thi.
Beat.
Baarish tez ho jaati hai.
Wall clock ki tick-tick.
Tube light buzz.
Kabir aankhen band karta hai.
KABIR
Main aaj bhi gaata hoon.
NAINA
Haan.
Door se suna hai kabhi kabhi.
Kabir usse dekhta hai, surprised.
KABIR
Tumne suna?
NAINA
Main teacher hoon, Kabir.
Bachche jhooth pakadna sikhate hain.
Aur tumhara gaana bhi.
Kabir ek chhoti, sad smile deta hai.
KABIR
Doctor late hai.
NAINA
Haan.
Par hum nahi.
Kabir guitar case kholta hai. Guitar nikalta hai.
Naina kuch nahi kehti.
Kabir softly ek aadha, raw sa melody bajaata hai. Koi performance nahi. Bas confession jaisa.
Naina ki aankhon mein aansu aa jaate hain, par woh roti nahi.
Kabir gaana khatam karta hai.
Silence.
Naina khadi hoti hai. Envelope dobara uthati hai aur Kabir ke saamne rakh deti hai.
NAINA
Ismein mera address nahi hai.
Forwarding number hai.
Kabir usko dekhta hai.
NAINA (CONT'D)
Agar kabhi tum sach bolna seekh jao...
toh call karna.
Kabir kuch bolna chahta hai, par ruk jaata hai.
NAINA (CONT'D)
Goodbye, Kabir.
Naina exits.
Door khulte hi thandi rain air room mein aati hai.
Kabir chair par baitha reh jaata hai. Guitar god mein. Envelope haath mein.
Wall clock ki needle ek minute aage badh jaati hai.
FADE OUT.
THE END
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