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3-Character Trio Cast 6 - 9 Minutes Pure Comedy

The Locked Tiffin

Full Shooting Script in Industry Courier Monospace Format

INT. RAILWAY WAITING ROOM - AFTERNOON
Harsh sunlight barred windows se slant kar rahi hai. Ceiling fan dheere ghoom raha hai. Peeling paint, metal benches, aur ek NOTICE BOARD par train timetable.
Ek BENCH ke beech mein ek LOCKED TIFFIN BOX pada hai.
BUA (54), printed kurta, heavy presence, tiffin ko suspiciously dekhti hain.
RITU (33), office bag aur lunch bag ke saath, tired eyes mein sarcasm.
PIHU (19), headphones neck mein, phone camera on, sneakers tapping.
A strange silence. Phir tiffin se aati khushboo.
BUA
(naak se smell kheenchkar)
Arre wah. Yeh khushboo toh seedha ghar se aati hai. Kiska hai yeh tiffin?
RITU
Dryly.
Mera nahi hai. Mera lunch bag itna sad hai ki khushboo hi nahi kar sakta.
PIHU
Camera on, excited.
Wait, wait. Mystery tiffin? Main record kar rahi hoon.
BUA
Record baad mein karna. Pehle batao, kiska hai?
RITU
Aapka hoga.
BUA
Mera? Main itni badi hoon, aur tumhe lagta hai main tiffin chhod dungi?
PIHU
Auntie, aapka confidence dekh ke lag raha hai tiffin bhi aapka hi hoga.
BUA
Meri baat mein dum hai.
RITU
Aur smell mein dum aloo.
PIHU laughs.
BUA glares.
BUA
Tum corporate logon ka khana toh salad aur guilt hota hai. Yeh masala kisi aur ka hai.
RITU
Corporate logon ka khana nahi, life bhi salad hoti hai. But main phir bhi claim nahi kar rahi.
PIHU
Main claim kar sakti hoon? Kyunki main emotionally connected feel kar rahi hoon.
BUA
Emotion se pet nahi bharta.
PIHU
Bhookh se bhi nahi, Auntie. Bas drama se time pass hota hai.
RITU notices the LOCK.
RITU
Isme lock kyun hai?
BUA
Taaki koi chori na kare.
PIHU
Ya taaki koi khol na sake.
BUA
Dono mein kya farak hai?
PIHU
Intent.
RITU
Okay, detective, phir proof do. Kiska hai?
BUA
Mera. Recipe suno—aloo, matar, aur thoda sa amchur. Aur andar kheer hogi.
RITU
Overconfident.
Aur agar main bolun andar rajma-chawal hai?
BUA
Phir tum jhooth bol rahi ho.
PIHU
Main bolun ki andar paneer roll hai?
BUA
Tumhari age mein log roll nahi, reels karte hain.
PIHU
Exactly. Aur ab main reel bana rahi hoon.
She turns camera toward them.
RITU
Nope. Camera off.
PIHU
Why? Authentic content hai.
RITU
Because I don’t want my face in a video called “Three Women Fight Over Smelly Tiffin.”
BUA
Smelly? Arre, yeh smell hai ya invitation?
PIHU
Invitation to what?
BUA
Khaane ka.
RITU
Aapko kaise pata isme khaana hi hai?
BUA
Tiffin hai. Usme kapde thodi honge.
PIHU
Could be jewelry.
RITU
Could be documents.
BUA
Could be tumhara homework.
PIHU
Homework smells like disappointment, not ghee.
All three look at the tiffin.
The fan creaks. Train announcement in the distance.
ANNOUNCER (V.O.)
Train number...
CUT OFF by static.
RITU checks timetable.
RITU
Delayed by forty minutes. Great. We have time to solve a food crime.
BUA
Food crime? Main toh bas apna haq maang rahi hoon.
PIHU
Okay, ownership test. Everyone say one thing only the owner would know.
RITU
Fine. The owner would know the lock code.
BUA
Owner code se pehle recipe jaanta hai.
PIHU
Owner would know why it’s on this bench.
Silence.
BUA stiffens.
RITU notices.
RITU
Aha.
BUA
Aha kya?
PIHU
Auntie... you know something.
BUA
Main bas... iss bench pe baithi thi pehle.
RITU
And then?
BUA
Aur phir announcement aaya. Main distract ho gayi.
PIHU
By what?
BUA
By the fact that my daughter’s train was also delayed.
RITU
Oh.
BUA quickly recovers.
BUA
But still, tiffin mera hi hai.
PIHU
Then open it.
BUA
Lock hai.
RITU
You said you locked it.
BUA
Maine bola tha taaki koi chori na kare.
PIHU
So you locked your own tiffin and forgot the key?
BUA
Main bhooli nahi. Main... carefully preserved kar rahi thi.
RITU
That is the most advanced form of forgetting I’ve ever heard.
PIHU
Brilliant. Emotional corruption.
BUA
Tum dono bas zyada bolti ho.
RITU
And you’re avoiding the question.
PIHU
Wait. Bribe round.
She pulls out a packet of chips.
PIHU
One packet for the truth.
BUA
Bas? Meri beti ka proposal lunch hai, aur tum chips de rahi ho?
RITU perks up.
RITU
Proposal lunch?
BUA freezes.
PIHU
Auntie...
BUA
Maine kuch nahi kaha.
RITU
Oh, now I’m interested.
BUA
Interest se zyada kaam ki cheez hai kya?
PIHU
Yes. Gossip.
RITU
And hunger.
BUA looks at the tiffin, defeated.
BUA
Theek hai. Main laayi thi.
PIHU
Aha!
RITU
Kya hai andar?
BUA
Food bhi hai. Aur... ek chhota sa surprise bhi.
PIHU
No. Don’t say it like that. That’s how horror films start.
BUA
Ek ring box hai.
RITU and PIHU stare.
RITU
Ring box?
BUA nods.
BUA
Meri beti ke liye. Uske office wale ladke ne haan bola tha. Aaj train se aati, toh station pe lunch ke saath proposal plan tha.
PIHU
And she didn’t come.
BUA
Nahi.
Beat.
RITU
So the tiffin isn’t for us.
BUA
Nahi.
PIHU
Then why does it smell so good?
BUA
Because I made it with love.
RITU
That explains the ghee.
BUA opens the tiffin carefully with the spoon and a little effort. Inside: aloo paratha, kheer, and a small ring box tucked in a napkin.
PIHU
This is... actually cute.
RITU
Unexpectedly tragic-cute.
BUA
Main drama nahi chahti thi.
RITU softens.
RITU
Maaf kijiye. Humne tiffin ko case bana diya.
PIHU
And content.
RITU
Especially content.
BUA
Khaana waste nahi hona chahiye.
PIHU
Agreed.
RITU
Fully.
Beat.
BUA slides the tiffin toward the center.
BUA
Toh phir... teenon milke khaate hain?
PIHU
Plot twist with protein.
RITU
And carbs.
PIHU
And emotional damage.
They laugh.
RITU takes out her water bottle.
PIHU puts the phone camera down.
BUA serves the first paratha with the spoon.
BUA
Bas ek condition.
RITU
Kya?
BUA
Koi isko “mystery tiffin” bolke reel nahi banayega.
PIHU
No promises.
RITU
I promise nothing. But I’ll make it tasteful.
BUA
Tum corporate logon ka “tasteful” bhi suspicious hota hai.
PIHU bites into the paratha.
PIHU
Auntie, this is illegal.
BUA
Khaana ya main?
PIHU
Dono.
RITU smiles despite herself.
The distant train whistle grows louder.
ANNOUNCER (V.O.)
Platform par aane wali train...
RITU gathers her bag.
PIHU puts headphones around neck.
BUA closes the tiffin, now unlocked.
RITU
So, train miss hui ya proposal?
BUA
Dono.
PIHU
But lunch nahi.
They head toward the exit, still chewing.
BUA
Agle station pe agar koi aur tiffin dikha na...
RITU
Please no.
PIHU
Please yes.
They exit together, bickering and laughing.
FADE OUT.
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