3-Character Trio Cast 6 - 9 Minutes Slice of Life/Family
One More Round
Full Shooting Script in Industry Courier Monospace Format
FADE IN:
INT. SMALL NEIGHBORHOOD BAR - NIGHT
Dim amber bulbs. Front glass ke paar cool blue streetlight. Three stools. Counter. Stacked glasses. Shutter half-down. Quiet, intimate.
MANISH (49), rolled sleeves, apron tied at waist, bar towel se counter saaf kar raha hai. Tired but kind eyes.
Aakash (22), clean haircut, college bag kandhe par, overconfident pose mein stool par baitha hai.
JATIN (51), checked shirt, easy smile, slightly lonely presence, beer glass ko dekh raha hai.
MANISH
Bas ek round aur. Phir lock.
AAKASH
Papa, aap har baar bolte ho
“bas ek round aur.”
MANISH
Aur har baar bar band bhi ho jaati hai.
JATIN
Business model solid hai. Emotional blackmail bhi
aur revenue bhi.
Manish hansi chhupa leta hai. Aakash apni seat seedhi karta hai.
AAKASH
Main bas bol raha hoon, mujhe late nahi hona chahiye.
MANISH
Late? College mein ya life mein?
AAKASH
Wow. Good one.
Jatin beer glass uthata hai, sip leta hai.
JATIN
Baap-beta ka dialogue hamesha trailer jaisa hota hai.
Picture kab shuru hogi, kisi ko pata nahi.
AAKASH
Aapko sab funny lagta hai kya, Jatin uncle?
JATIN
Nahi. Bas aadat hai.
Beat.
Manish cash tin ko push karke side mein rakhta hai. Receipt pad uthata hai.
MANISH
Teri fees ka notice aaya tha aaj.
Aakash ka face tight ho jaata hai.
AAKASH
Main dekh lunga.
MANISH
Haan, dekh lega. Jaise kal ke assignment ko
“dekh” ke submit kar diya tha.
AAKASH
Papa, main bachcha nahi hoon.
MANISH
Pata hai.
Isliye tension aur zyada hoti hai.
Jatin dono ko dekhta hai. Soft smile.
JATIN
Mardon ka problem yehi hai.
Pyaar bhi budget mein bolte hain.
“Kitna hua?” “Kaise hua?” “Kyun hua?”
Seedha “theek hai” koi bolta hi nahi.
AAKASH
Aap philosophy class mein the kya?
JATIN
Nahi. Zindagi class mein.
Aakash scoffs, but listens.
AAKASH
Mujhe bas itna pata hai, Papa ko lagta hai
main unki mehnat samajhta nahi.
MANISH
Aur mujhe lagta hai tu meri mehnat ko
halka leta hai.
AAKASH
Kyunki aap bolte hi nahi kya kar rahe ho!
MANISH
Har cheez bolke ki jaati hai kya?
AAKASH
Haan! Kabhi kabhi haan!
Silence. Streetlight ka blue glass pe reflect hota hai.
Jatin apni shirt ke pocket se ek purana envelope nikaalta hai. Counter par rakhta hai.
JATIN
Phir suno. Bolke hi karni chahiye.
Manish envelope ko dekh kar sakht ho jaata hai.
MANISH
Ye kya hai?
Jatin envelope kholta hai. Tuition receipts, bank slips, handwritten notes.
Aakash uth khada hota hai.
AAKASH
Ye... meri fees?
Jatin nod karta hai.
JATIN
Haan.
AAKASH
Aap ne... kyun?
JATIN
Charity nahi.
Hisab hai.
Manish ka chehra dark ho jaata hai.
MANISH
Kaunsa hisab?
JATIN
Yaad hai, Manish?
Jab mere baap ke baad main phase tha,
tab tune jo paisa diya tha?
Bina naam, bina shor.
Bola tha—“Wapas mat karna. Bas padhai kar.”
Manish ka gussa ek second ko toot jaata hai.
MANISH
Woh purani baat...
JATIN
Purani hi sahi.
Main bhoola nahi.
Teri wajah se main aaj yahan baitha hoon.
Aur is ladke ki fees...
samajh le, one more round.
Aakash stunned. Manish jaw tight.
MANISH
Tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi?
JATIN
Kyunki tu mana karta.
Aur main janta tha tu izzat ko
paise se zyada important maanta hai.
MANISH
Main apne bete ka kharcha khud...
JATIN
Khud hi toh kar raha tha.
Bas main saath de raha tha.
Beat. Aakash slowly sits back down.
AAKASH
Papa... aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?
Manish looks at him. Vulnerable now.
MANISH
Kyunki main chahta tha tu bade hoke
kisi ka bojh na lage.
Aur shayad... main darr raha tha
ki tu samajh jayega main itna strong bhi nahi.
Aakash ki aankhon mein guilt.
AAKASH
Main aapko weak samajh raha tha.
MANISH
Aur main tujhe ungrateful.
Jatin softly clears his throat, emotional but hiding it.
JATIN
Dekh lo. Bar band, aur finally baat khul gayi.
Aakash ek beer glass uthata hai, phir Manish ko de deta hai.
AAKASH
Next round meri taraf se.
Manish first surprised, then smiles despite himself.
MANISH
Teri taraf se?
AAKASH
Haan. One more round.
Jatin laughs, genuine and warm.
JATIN
Bas. Yeh hui na family.
Manish receipt pad se envelope ko tap karta hai, then cash tin band karta hai.
MANISH
Chalo. Par glass dhone mein help karoge.
AAKASH
Deal.
JATIN
Main witness hoon.
Teenon ek dusre ko dekhte hain. Awkward, soft, real.
FADE OUT.
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