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Goa Is a Bad Influence

Goa Is a Bad Influence

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Kabir and Tanya walked near the water.

“So this stays here,” he said.

“That was the agreement.”

“We did not agree. You declared.”

“You failed to object.”

“I was distracted.”

She splashed water at him.

He caught her wrist lightly and let go before the gesture became possession.

“Are you always this careful?” he asked.

“Are you always this interested in other people’s rules?”

“Rules tell you where the interesting door is.”

“That is exactly what people say before creating paperwork.”

Farther up the beach, Naina was talking to Dev. Meher took photographs with Vikram. Rhea and Sam had turned throwing a ball into litigation.

“Your friends know you better than you like,” Kabir said.

“So do my parents.”

“And you?”

Tanya watched a wave erase their footprints.

“I have a working draft.”

For once, Kabir did not joke.

“Me too,” he said.

The moment might have become serious if Sam had not run past shouting that Rhea cheated at beach cricket.

On Day Six, they hired scooters in the morning and returned them before going out at night. Tanya rode behind Meher, who treated traffic like a brand activation. They stopped at a market, bought jewellery and bargained badly.

Rhea kissed a software consultant from Bengaluru near a music bar and later described it as “procedurally adequate.” Naina exchanged numbers with a woman who ran a travel startup because even holiday networking recognised her. Meher danced with Kabir for one song while Tanya was talking to Zoya.

Tanya noticed.

The feeling that appeared was small, sharp and unjustified.

“Jealous?” Zoya asked.

“No.”

“Then your face is doing unpaid theatre.”

“We are casual.”

“Casual is a type of clothing. People are complicated.”

Zoya handed her a bowl of peanuts. “Eat before philosophy.”

Tanya joined the dance floor. Kabir smiled and reached for her. She made him wait half a beat before taking his hand.

Later, at Casa Estrela, they kissed on the stairs until Mrs D’Souza switched on the corridor light.

“Some guests sleep,” she said.

“We were quiet,” Kabir replied.

“You knocked over a plant.”

Tanya looked down. A small pot lay on its side near Kabir’s shoe.

“Five hundred?” she asked.

Mrs D’Souza examined the unbroken pot. “One hundred and my opinion.”

“The opinion feels expensive,” Kabir said.

In Tanya’s room, they talked longer than they kissed. Kabir described growing up in a house where every disagreement became silence. Tanya told him how competence could become a cage when everyone benefited from it.

“Maybe we are only honest with strangers,” he said.

“We know each other’s surnames.”

“Acquaintances, then.”

“Dangerous category.”

The intimacy that followed was mutual, implied and private. In the morning, Kabir left before breakfast after writing 7:42 in Mrs D’Souza’s register.

“At least one man learns,” she said.

The final day arrived with the cruelty of checkout time.

Before the final day, the holiday produced two incidents that became group mythology.

The first began with a boat.

Meher had booked a morning water activity after reading reviews, comparing photographs and ignoring one warning that said operator changes schedule according to sea mood. At eight, the eight Delhi travellers stood on a beach wearing life jackets and incomplete confidence.

“I do not trust equipment described as adventure,” Naina said.

“The operator has certification,” Meher replied.

“The laminated paper is misspelled.”

Sam volunteered to go first on the inflatable ride. Rhea announced that his willingness proved nothing except a reduced attachment to consequences. Dev checked every strap. Vikram covered his camera. Kabir stood beside Tanya near the water.

“Afraid?” he asked.

“Respectfully cautious.”

“Teacher for afraid.”

“Event consultant for irritating.”

The first group returned shouting and soaked. Sam claimed it was incredible. Dev said he had swallowed half the Arabian Sea. Rhea climbed aboard immediately because she treated other people’s poor outcomes as challenges.

Tanya went with Kabir, Meher and Vikram. The boat gathered speed. The inflatable lifted, struck the water and lifted again. Tanya screamed before she could decide whether the sound represented terror or joy.

Kabir shouted something she could not hear. A wave hit them sideways. Meher’s careful braid came apart. Vikram, deprived of his camera, looked strangely free.

When they returned to shore, Tanya’s knees shook.

“Adequate?” Kabir asked.

She pushed him into the water.

He caught her wrist, and both fell. They surfaced laughing while the others applauded.

For one bright minute, attraction was not secret, complicated or private. It was simply visible.

Naina watched from the sand. Meher saw Naina watching. Neither attached the correct future meaning.

Afterward they ate breakfast at a shack, wet clothes drying under the sun. Rhea discovered she had lost one earring during the ride.

“Sentimental?” Dev asked.

“Expensive.”

“Worse.”

The operator offered to search the sea, which everyone understood as politeness rather than possibility. Kabir removed a cheap silver ring from his own key chain and handed it to Rhea.

“Replacement jewellery,” he said.

“This is not an earring.”

“It is symbolic compensation.”

Rhea slipped it onto her smallest finger. “Temporary evidence.”

Tanya noticed the gesture and experienced a brief, unattractive pinch. She reminded herself that Kabir was not hers, the ring was nearly worthless and Rhea had lost actual property.

That afternoon, Rhea asked Tanya whether she and Kabir were “a thing.”

They sat under an umbrella while the others slept or swam.

“A holiday thing,” Tanya said.

“Defined how?”

“Not defined.”

“Then why did you glare at the ring?”

“I did not.”

“I litigate facial expressions.”

Tanya adjusted her sunglasses. “Do you like him?”

Rhea looked toward the water, where Kabir and Sam were attempting to throw a ball without hitting strangers.

“He is attractive,” she said.

“That was not the question.”

“Look who discovered direct language.”

“Rhea.”

“I flirt with everyone.”

“Also not an answer.”

Rhea turned to her. “Would it matter?”

The honest answer was yes. The fair answer was no. Tanya chose a third.

“We are all here for fun.”

Rhea nodded slowly. “Excellent policy statement.”

The conversation ended without information. It would later become one of the moments both women remembered differently.

The second incident began with Rhea’s missing room key.

After the market, the women returned to Casa Estrela carrying paper bags, sunburn and no key for Room Four. Naina emptied her cross-body pouch twice. Meher searched the taxi. Tanya called the market stall where they had bought earrings. Rhea accused the key of being poorly designed.

Mrs D’Souza stood behind reception with her hand out.

“Five hundred.”

“We have not concluded loss,” Rhea said.

“Key absent. That is loss.”

“Temporary displacement.”

“Five hundred temporary rupees.”

They paid. Mrs D’Souza produced the spare and her promised opinion.

“People come here to lose inhibition. They lose keys because keys are easier.”

“Do you rehearse these?” Tanya asked.

“Guests provide material.”

The key reappeared that night in Naina’s beach bag, inside a zipped pocket nobody remembered using.

“You had it,” Rhea said.

“You gave me your phone, sunglasses and wallet,” Naina replied. “I became a municipal storage facility.”

“Why the zipped pocket?”

“Because you said, and I quote, ‘Protect this with your life.’”

Rhea remembered saying it about her phone. Apparently she had included the key.

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