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Goa Is a Bad Influence

Goa Is a Bad Influence

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The argument grew, absorbing every small irritation from the week. Meher complained that Naina treated every plan as a budget threat. Naina replied that Meher treated money as a visual accessory. Rhea accused Tanya of becoming Kabir’s private tour guide and abandoning the group. Tanya reminded Rhea that she had vanished with the software consultant.

“For twenty-seven minutes,” Rhea said.

“You timed it?” Meher asked Naina.

“Live location.”

For ten minutes, the holiday looked capable of ending badly.

Then Mrs D’Souza knocked and handed them the five hundred rupees.

“Key found,” she said. “Lesson incomplete but refundable.”

Naina took the money. Rhea began laughing. The others followed because the alternative was admitting they were tired enough to fight over object custody.

They ordered dinner to the guesthouse and ate cross-legged on the floor. No boys, no photographs, no itinerary. Meher removed her makeup. Rhea apologised for treating Naina like infrastructure. Tanya admitted she had spent too much time with Kabir. Naina said she liked being needed until people forgot to ask.

“Tomorrow is girls until evening,” Tanya proposed.

“No men,” Meher said.

“No spreadsheets,” Rhea added.

Naina placed a hand over her phone. “That is discrimination.”

The next morning they went alone to a quieter beach. Without the boys’ group, their old rhythm returned. They bought coconut water, shared sunscreen and discussed the previous night’s flirtations with affectionate cruelty.

“Kabir?” Meher asked Tanya.

“What about him?”

“Review.”

“No details.”

“Star rating.”

“This is not an app.”

“Everything is an app eventually,” Naina said.

Tanya refused to answer. The women understood from her refusal that the review was positive.

Rhea lay back on the sand. “I kissed him too.”

Tanya sat up.

Rhea waited one second, then grinned. “I’m joking.”

“That was not funny.”

“Your face was.”

Meher threw sand near Rhea’s feet. “Holiday rule: do not manufacture jealousy.”

“New rule,” Naina said. “Needs group approval.”

Tanya laughed after the others did, but the joke introduced a possibility that had not previously occupied a full sentence.

That evening, when the men joined them, she watched Kabir differently. He spoke to Naina while paying the bill, complimented Meher’s photographs and argued with Rhea about whether flirting required intent. None of it was hidden. None of it looked innocent after the morning’s joke.

Kabir came to Tanya later at the bar.

“You are quiet.”

“Observing.”

“Professionally?”

“Personally.”

He waited for the question. She did not ask it.

Instead they walked to the beach. Music softened behind them. The tide left shining lines on the sand.

“What happens when we go home?” Kabir asked.

“School reopens.”

“Your ability to answer emotionally remains inspiring.”

“What do you want to happen?”

“Coffee.”

“Ambitious.”

“Dinner if coffee succeeds.”

“And if dinner succeeds?”

“We stop pretending the next step can be scheduled.”

Tanya looked toward the dark water. “I don’t want a holiday romance converted into administration.”

“Then no administration.”

“No promises.”

“No promises.”

“No drama.”

Kabir smiled. “That one is outside our control.”

They kissed beneath a sky too cloudy for stars. Tanya mistook the absence of promises for the presence of honesty.

The rooms looked conquered. Sand lived in every bag. Nobody could find Naina’s room key. Meher had exceeded luggage limits without purchasing anything she remembered. Rhea wore sunglasses indoors.

They ate a last brunch at Zoya’s café with the men.

Vikram arranged them for a group photograph. Sam leaned too far forward. Dev blinked. Naina held up the room key they had spent an hour searching for. Kabir stood behind Tanya, one hand resting on the back of Meher’s chair while he looked at Tanya.

Nobody noticed the hand.

Over coffee, Rhea declared that holiday honesty was easier than Delhi honesty.

“Nothing follows you here,” she said.

“Everything follows eventually,” Dev replied.

Kabir lifted his glass. “Honesty is rarely simple.”

“That is what dishonest people put on cushions,” Rhea said.

Tanya looked at him. “Are you seeing anyone?”

He glanced around the table. “At this exact moment, seven people and a waiter.”

Everyone groaned. Tanya threw a napkin at him.

The question dissolved because the answer was funny.

At Casa Estrela, Mrs D’Souza returned their deposit after deducting one hundred rupees for the plant.

“Come again,” she said. “After learning volume control.”

“Will you miss us?” Meher asked.

“I will notice silence.”

Zoya hugged them outside the café. Vikram shared the photo album. Sam created a group chat called DELHI PEOPLE DISCOVER GOA. Dev promised to recommend restaurants back home.

Kabir walked Tanya toward her taxi.

“Coffee in Delhi?” he asked.

“Perhaps.”

“That means no in teacher language.”

“It means improve your argument.”

“I have your number.”

“A weak opening.”

“I know your preferred drink.”

“Evidence of observation.”

“I can make you laugh when you are trying not to.”

Tanya looked at him.

“Better,” she said.

He hugged her. For one reckless second she wanted a dramatic goodbye, something that admitted the week had entered real life. Instead she stepped back and joined her friends, who were arguing with the driver about luggage.

On the flight home, Meher edited photographs. Naina reconciled expenses. Rhea slept with her mouth open. Tanya looked down at the shrinking coast while messages arrived in the Goa group.

Kabir sent no private goodbye.

She told herself she was relieved.

The red bikini was buried in her suitcase. A faint bruise marked one knee from the fallen plant. Her body carried small evidence of a version of herself that had not required permission.

The night before departure, Zoya closed the café early and allowed both groups to stay after the last customers left.

“You are now unpaid staff,” she told them. “Carry chairs.”

They moved tables beneath the awning while Vikram connected a speaker. The gathering was not a party so much as eight tired people unwilling to admit the week had ended.

Mrs D’Souza arrived at ten with the repaired plant Kabir had knocked over and a bottle of homemade lime cordial.

“No alcohol?” Sam asked.

“You have demonstrated enough personality,” she replied.

They played a final game. Everyone wrote one question on paper, folded it and placed it in a bowl. Answers could be refused without penalty. Rhea approved the consent structure. Naina asked who supplied the paper. Meher requested better lighting.

The first question was: What will you lie about when you go home?

Sam said the bill. Dev said how little he had slept. Meher would reduce the number of clubs. Naina would describe all drinks as “one or two.” Rhea would deny losing an earring.

“I will not lie,” Tanya said. “I will provide an edited travel summary.”

“Teacher fraud,” Kabir said.

“Selective curriculum.”

The next paper asked: Who here surprised you?

Dev chose Rhea because she apologised after arguments. Naina chose Sam because he accepted every refusal without sulking, a compliment that made him unexpectedly serious.

“Basic decency,” he said.

“Still worth noticing,” Naina replied.

Kabir chose Tanya.

“Expected a schoolteacher,” he said. “Met an unreliable narrator.”

“Why unreliable?”

“You describe yourself as cautious, but caution is not the same as lacking appetite. You act as if freedom happened to you here. You planned it in Delhi.”

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